Character Challenge
Script to Screen - Short project.
Who are our characters?
Susie Wells
Susie is in her mid 20's who has just made it as a 'Weather lady' and is kicking of her career in television. Susie travels daily from Southend via Train accompanied by her boyfriend, a studio producer.
Jennifer Baker
'THE JOURNEY'
Who are our characters?
Susie Wells
Susie is in her mid 20's who has just made it as a 'Weather lady' and is kicking of her career in television. Susie travels daily from Southend via Train accompanied by her boyfriend, a studio producer.
Jennifer Baker
Jennifer is in her early 20's and is a Secretary who commutes to London from Upminster. Jennifer seeks reassurance through others in her friendships and her many partners.
Setting
(Train Station Stop)
(Train Station)
Winters morning, 4:30am, Quiet.
The Main Story
Two young women,
Jennifer and Susie, share the same train journey daily. During the quiet
commute in the early hours of the morning, all that links them is a soft smile
to each other, until a poster starts conversation as Jennifer recognises the
new weather girl: Susie. Moments later, they discover something else links them
when Chad, Susie's boyfriend, and one of Jennifer's many ex-lovers, returns
from the toilet. Jennifer recognises Chad’s controlling nature and defends
Susie the way she wishes she had. Who knew a soft smile between two strangers
could mean so much?
The Pitch
During a quiet commute two strangers become unlikely friends and find a connection through trauma. A shared confrontation is the catalyst.
Opening Line
JENNIFER gestures towards empty train seat.
JENNIFER
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